3 annotation thesis statement and intro to paper

Erik klemetti, Jonathan Schmalzbach, Douglas Heller, and Mark Biddle
September19, 2002. ushistory.org/.10/15/08
http://www.ushistory.org/PAINE/

This articles gives a brief  biography of Thomas Paine's early life and his life and the book that he has written throw out his life will growing up in Thetford,England and how he became involved in the American Revolution. This article also gives links to his books Common Sense and how it influenced Americans, to win their independence from Britain.

The article offers several primary sources, including links to the books  Common Sense(1776), The Crisis(1776-77), The Rights of Man(1791-92), and the Age of Reason(1794-96). The co-writers, Erik Klemetti, Jonathan Schmalzbach, Douglas Heller, and Mark Biddle are the unhistory.org project revising team.

Example thesis statement and introduction:

Thomas Paine is a literacy genuise that throw his phamplets shaped American history. He wrote Common Sense that made Americans see that they were being abused by Britain and burned a lust for freedom in their hearts and souls. becouse of his many comtrebusions to American literacy he and his work's has made America rise up and stand on its on. But it would be many years  before "true freedom for all rings".